Friday, November 16, 2012

55: Revenge


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Sometimes, things just work out this way… that’s what I told myself as I slipped the last round into the clip, popped it into place, and pulled back the slide. It returned with the satisfying sound of aggression. After a final look, I carefully turned his photo face down. 

Revenge would finally be mine. Tonight.
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FFF-55 Vol. XLV. Tell a story in exactly fifty-five words. Go see G-Man.

15 comments:

  1. Dangerous game this is !
    Well written !

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  2. oh snap, not a good sign when they start to turn the eyes away from them....great touch the turning over of the photo

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  3. Certainly there is intention and it promises to be bloody at least-
    My imagination kind of launched into :where, how and so forth!

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  4. Shoot the pic, I say--no jailtime! I like the ominous promise in this one.

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  5. Yikes. And where do you guys get these photos?? "The satisfying sound of aggression" is the best description I've ever heard of the mechanics of loading a gun.

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  6. Is that a gun in your pants, or are you just happy to see me?



    BANG!

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  7. I really like "sound of aggression." Very, very cool.

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  8. What a cliff hanger! I hope the revenge is worth it.

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  9. Yeah Buddy, written just the way I like em!
    You need to come around more often.
    Loved your locked and loaded 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  10. Very cool! I totally love this..excitement and anticipation. Great last line! Mine is here
    Have you a TRULY BLESSED SUNDAY and a WONDERFUL THANKSGIVING!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  11. Great idea, and no worries that the cops might find out!

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  12. Linc,

    Was asked to do a write up on 55s for Nain Rouge mag...(G referenced the mag in his post the other day) would like to include yours (with credit of course). If interested, please email me ASAP so I can work it in.

    b

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