Friday, May 31, 2013

55: Climax

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Lightning—and your face lit up above me. A half second later, thunder crashed like artillery outside, and we met at our destination, bursting into each other in both body and spirit.

Several long seconds passed in the clouds overhead as the rumbling faded away into the miles, and you leaned down to kiss me.
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FFF-55 Vol. LVII. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.

14 comments:

  1. Pretty cool to have a sound track... ;-)

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  2. Now THAT is serendipity! Loved it! :)

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  3. Love the various levels at work here, and the intensity. A great metaphor, and an excellent 55.

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  4. I think this is a very beautiful piece of writing. The first line is an amazing image.

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  5. So Linc ...
    You got laid eh?
    And with climactic fireworks!!
    Sweeeeeeeeet
    Thanks for sharing, have a Kick Ass Week End

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    1. Ahem, have you forgotten that one of the F's is for *fiction*? :P

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  6. Wow good one! and very real! thanks-

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