Friday, August 5, 2011

Holdup

“Jesus Jim, what were we thinking?”

“We discussed this; it’s the only way,” I told her. I opened the chamber and started filling the magazine. “Besides, wasn’t this your idea?”

She smiled, a little embarrassed. “Yeah, I guess,” she admitted. “Let’s do it then.”

Together, we walked calmly through the doors and into the bank.

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FFF-55 Vol. XIX. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.
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5 comments:

  1. Brian MillerAugust 5, 2011 at 9:36:00 PM EDT

    well, if we have to pay the bank back such a high interest rate it only seems fair you know...smiles.

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  2. G-ManAugust 5, 2011 at 9:46:00 PM EDT

    The only Bank Robbery post today!!!
    I really liked it.
    Great 55 My Friend
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  3. hopeAugust 6, 2011 at 12:28:00 PM EDT

    Is THAT how politicians fund their pet projects? ;)

    Have a good weekend!

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  4. Jannie FunsterAugust 6, 2011 at 4:53:00 PM EDT

    I hope I'm never in a bank when they walk in!!

    here is my 55

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  5. gautami tripathyAugust 6, 2011 at 10:07:00 PM EDT

    What next? Waiting....


    other shoe

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