Friday, June 3, 2011

Fantasy

She walked toward me and into my arms. They wrapped effortlessly around her waist. The sweetness and subtlety of her scent overcame me. I felt her hair on my cheek and the warmth of her face on my neck. She kissed me softly and whispered in my ear.

Then, reality: “What? Sorry, I got distracted...”

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FFF-55 Vol. XVII. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.
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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 3, 2011 at 9:28:00 AM EDT

    Oh boo ~ sounded like a good moment to hold on to :-)

    Here's mine today: Flash 55 ~ You Brighten My Day.

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  2. Brian MillerJune 3, 2011 at 11:36:00 AM EDT

    haha way to rip the carpet from underneath us there in the twist...very sensual up to that point...

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  3. MonaJune 3, 2011 at 1:38:00 PM EDT

    :) They stop listening, after a point...

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  4. Pheromone GirlJune 3, 2011 at 5:39:00 PM EDT

    I've had those moments, more than once...

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  5. Monkey ManJune 3, 2011 at 5:55:00 PM EDT

    That's a major distraction.

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  6. G-ManJune 3, 2011 at 8:40:00 PM EDT

    Rats!!!
    Reality BITES!
    Most excellent 55 My Friend.
    Just the way they should be written.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  7. Everyday GoddessJune 5, 2011 at 5:48:00 PM EDT

    so often the fantasy is better than the reality. nice 55

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