Friday, March 25, 2011

Proposal

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I stressed over it for weeks, agonizing over the details. Finally, everything was in place.

I convinced her to rise with me for an early walk on the beach. I was nervous, but soon the sun broke the Maya Riviera horizon, and I knew it was time.

I got on one knee.

She said yes.
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FFF-55 Vol. X. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.
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5 comments:

  1. Maude LynnMarch 25, 2011 at 1:51:00 PM EDT

    A 55 can't get better than that!

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  2. TALONMarch 25, 2011 at 10:09:00 PM EDT

    Awww! I loved this. Fiction or not, I'm glad she said yes. I love how you put such great details in the 55 words - so well done!

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  3. JingleMarch 25, 2011 at 10:47:00 PM EDT

    bless you,
    Glad that she gives your her nodding..

    Cheers.

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  4. gautami tripathyMarch 26, 2011 at 1:12:00 PM EDT

    Beautiful...


    Here is mine:
    homing

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  5. G-ManMarch 26, 2011 at 9:34:00 PM EDT

    I LOVE Wedding Proposal stories!
    Very Romantic Linc..
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Sunday!

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