Friday, June 7, 2013

55: Best Served Cold

He had no idea I’d be there; the look on his face was priceless.

Later, when his wife was questioned, she’d report that he’d failed to meet her, that she thought he’d missed his flight, since that had happened before.

But in reality, he was becoming a permanent part of the new terminal’s concrete foundation.
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FFF-55 Vol. LVII. Tell a story in exactly fifty-five words. Go see G-Man.


  1. Was his name "Hoffa"? I assume the wife new nothing about this... hmmm.

  2. The PERFECT crime!
    You are a bit sinister these days Linc.
    Keep holding up The Dark Side for us Brother.
    Loved your concrete 55
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

  3. Sinister, and no doubt has actually happened, I'm thinking, at some point. So many things, including (some) husbands, are better cold. ;_)

  4. so he is sleeping with hoffa then...smiles...ha...hey whatever it takes right?

  5. Bwahahahaaaa! I love a good murder mystery!

  6. OMG! Now there's a woman on a mission!!!

  7. That's one way to cement a relationship! ;-)

  8. This is quite a story, so well told in 55 words.