Friday, April 29, 2011

The Wish

This wish was no different than a million that came before it, except it came true. One night I went to bed, pissed, and the next... well, needless to say people noticed. Mom cried, Dad called missing persons. After I freaked out our old neighbor, I learned to keep my mouth shut.

I'd become invisible.
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FFF-55 Vol. XIV. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.

7 comments:

  1. invisible would be a term that fits many a youth...wished for or otherwise...

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  2. I thought for sure you'd simply blown your top.

    - Alice

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  3. WOW

    I really loved this one.

    Great way to build curiosity and then BAM


    thanks!

    that is all

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  4. Not always easy to discern when to speak and when to stay silent.

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  5. I feel like that sometimes myself.
    Loved your idea
    loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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