Friday, April 29, 2011

The Wish

This wish was no different than a million that came before it, except it came true. One night I went to bed, pissed, and the next... well, needless to say people noticed. Mom cried, Dad called missing persons. After I freaked out our old neighbor, I learned to keep my mouth shut.

I'd become invisible.
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FFF-55 Vol. XIV. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.
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7 comments:

  1. Brian MillerApril 29, 2011 at 7:39:00 AM EDT

    invisible would be a term that fits many a youth...wished for or otherwise...

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  2. AnonymousApril 29, 2011 at 11:00:00 AM EDT

    I thought for sure you'd simply blown your top.

    - Alice

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  3. PBJdreamerApril 29, 2011 at 1:11:00 PM EDT

    WOW

    I really loved this one.

    Great way to build curiosity and then BAM


    thanks!

    that is all

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  4. BelindaApril 29, 2011 at 6:50:00 PM EDT

    Not always easy to discern when to speak and when to stay silent.

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  5. Steve IsaakApril 29, 2011 at 7:33:00 PM EDT

    LOL, great, love this.

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  6. G-ManApril 29, 2011 at 8:57:00 PM EDT

    I feel like that sometimes myself.
    Loved your idea
    loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  7. Maude LynnApril 30, 2011 at 4:51:00 PM EDT

    This is awesome!

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