At some point, it becomes more about doing than waiting. Unmet
needs have a way of sinking into the cracks between people, and freezing in the
cold, and breaking the two even farther apart. Eventually, this becomes inevitable.
That’s what she said to me, anyway (or something like it), before she walked out the door.
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FFF-55 vol. XLII. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.
Ha! I was thinking "Wow, what a most heartfelt, deeply sensitive man... and then the last line made me laugh!
ReplyDeleteHoping this truly is a Fiction piece. :)
nice last kick in the nads she took there....but unmet needs do have a way of wearing you down, you know...but then that is a to way street as well...
ReplyDeleteWhat a "WORDY" way to break up! Yours my favorite so far!
ReplyDeleteMine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!
hugs
shakira
Well Linc, your return to the fold story
ReplyDeleteRocked Brother!! Of course this is FICTION!!
Flash Fiction!! Damn Good Flash Fiction I might add!!
Most excellent 55 My Friend
Thanks for playing, thanks for responding so creatively
to my Facebook prodding...Have a Kick Ass Week-End
Bet he's still trying to figure out what she needed. Loved your 55.
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