Friday, November 16, 2012

55: Revenge


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Sometimes, things just work out this way… that’s what I told myself as I slipped the last round into the clip, popped it into place, and pulled back the slide. It returned with the satisfying sound of aggression. After a final look, I carefully turned his photo face down. 

Revenge would finally be mine. Tonight.
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FFF-55 Vol. XLV. Tell a story in exactly fifty-five words. Go see G-Man.
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15 comments:

  1. PratibhaNovember 16, 2012 at 3:03:00 AM EST

    Dangerous game this is !
    Well written !

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  2. AnonymousNovember 16, 2012 at 3:37:00 AM EST

    I'd like to hear more about this!

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  3. Brian MillerNovember 16, 2012 at 6:32:00 AM EST

    oh snap, not a good sign when they start to turn the eyes away from them....great touch the turning over of the photo

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  4. izzyNovember 16, 2012 at 7:25:00 AM EST

    Certainly there is intention and it promises to be bloody at least-
    My imagination kind of launched into :where, how and so forth!

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  5. hedgewitchNovember 16, 2012 at 10:53:00 AM EST

    Shoot the pic, I say--no jailtime! I like the ominous promise in this one.

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  6. Yvonne OsborneNovember 16, 2012 at 11:19:00 AM EST

    Yikes. And where do you guys get these photos?? "The satisfying sound of aggression" is the best description I've ever heard of the mechanics of loading a gun.

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  7. BubbaNovember 16, 2012 at 12:11:00 PM EST

    Is that a gun in your pants, or are you just happy to see me?



    BANG!

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  8. Maude LynnNovember 16, 2012 at 12:25:00 PM EST

    I really like "sound of aggression." Very, very cool.

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  9. TeresaNovember 16, 2012 at 1:42:00 PM EST

    What a cliff hanger! I hope the revenge is worth it.

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  10. just a girlNovember 16, 2012 at 3:43:00 PM EST

    nice. very!

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  11. G-ManNovember 16, 2012 at 5:30:00 PM EST

    Yeah Buddy, written just the way I like em!
    You need to come around more often.
    Loved your locked and loaded 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  12. UnknownNovember 18, 2012 at 5:48:00 AM EST

    Very cool! I totally love this..excitement and anticipation. Great last line! Mine is here
    Have you a TRULY BLESSED SUNDAY and a WONDERFUL THANKSGIVING!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  13. Ann (bunnygirl)November 18, 2012 at 10:50:00 AM EST

    Great idea, and no worries that the cops might find out!

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  14. Brian MillerNovember 18, 2012 at 12:35:00 PM EST

    Linc,

    Was asked to do a write up on 55s for Nain Rouge mag...(G referenced the mag in his post the other day) would like to include yours (with credit of course). If interested, please email me ASAP so I can work it in.

    b

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  15. MargaretNovember 19, 2012 at 12:03:00 AM EST

    Wowzers, this is a packed 55!

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