Lightning—and your face lit up above me. A half second later, thunder crashed like artillery outside, and we met at our destination, bursting into each other in both body and spirit.
Several long seconds passed in the clouds overhead as the rumbling faded away into the miles, and you leaned down to kiss me.
* * * * * FFF-55 Vol. LVII. Tell a story in exactly 55 words. Go see G-Man.
Pretty cool to have a sound track... ;-)
ReplyDeleteNow THAT is serendipity! Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteLove the various levels at work here, and the intensity. A great metaphor, and an excellent 55.
ReplyDelete,,, sigh
ReplyDeleteAnd then came the lightning!!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful!
ReplyDeleteGotta love chemistry.
ReplyDeleteGreat metaphor.
ReplyDeleteI think this is a very beautiful piece of writing. The first line is an amazing image.
ReplyDeleteSo Linc ...
ReplyDeleteYou got laid eh?
And with climactic fireworks!!
Sweeeeeeeeet
Thanks for sharing, have a Kick Ass Week End
Ahem, have you forgotten that one of the F's is for *fiction*? :P
DeleteWow good one! and very real! thanks-
ReplyDeleteThat was nice and intense.
ReplyDeleteFlash 55 - prick lee